tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5361044886917674114.post3531577667709395071..comments2012-10-08T16:07:36.772-07:00Comments on A Man With A Phone: III. A Man With A PhoneAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09430097404707046404noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5361044886917674114.post-13556145504208588152012-10-08T16:07:36.772-07:002012-10-08T16:07:36.772-07:00Thanks for the comments. I think the next scene wi...Thanks for the comments. I think the next scene will both make MJ more of her own character and help with expo. She's actually more interesting than Oracle, you'll just have to wait and see why.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09430097404707046404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5361044886917674114.post-33380319324380777702012-10-08T09:34:25.090-07:002012-10-08T09:34:25.090-07:00The story is progressing nicely, MJ's speech i...The story is progressing nicely, MJ's speech is a bit much relying on reaction from oracle, she has yet to show any character beyond being the audience surrogate.<br /><br />A expo heavy chapter (making it more better hidden that it's expo but still getting all the facts across could help there) but it is necessary to have at least one of these in sci-fi plots so that people understand the world.<br /><br />I'm enjoying where the story is going so far and apart from tiny niggle the series has potential to become amazing.<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12726123266616375407noreply@blogger.com